Me and a friend of mine rustled up the courage to make a video review for Call of Duty and we were just wondering what people thought.  We both have massive respect for this site and the people who are part of it, and we probably wouldn't have done this if it wasn't for GB, so I thought of it as a suitable place to post it. Hope this doesn't break any of the forum rules!
The production has a lot to be desired but at this stage but we just want to test the waters and see if people can respect our intellectual insight enough to hear more of it. 

Be ruthless, be generous. Any feedback is appreciated.  
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jk1GM8XxgW8

Is that a hole in your left sock?

Is the xx in your video review?

Not bad... but your sound quality is terrible. Get yourself miced up better.  Also, try and memorise your talking points... it's very obvious you're looking down at your little card. 
 
Overall though, you have an enjoyable dynamic that makes me want to watch you guys, and you seem to flow quite well.

Not a bad debut, guys!

Thanks for all the awesome feedback!  
We're going to try and start putting all the suggestions into the works and tighten this all up for the next video. 
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