For some reason I'm surprised that you understand basics of editing and pacing. I guess I've seen too many bad youtube reviews. Would have been good if in the cinematic footage you had disabled the HUD but since you say it's the Xbox360 version you couldn't do that.
Edit: Oh yeah, good job.
Definately well done. I have two comments one it:
* Like someone else said your style (pacing and wordchoice) seems very reminiscent of GT, I guess you can take that as a compliment because they are great but it would be cooler if you developed your own style.
* Your voice is not as pleasant to listen to as the Giantbomb crew or the gametrailer dude. I'd advice you to drink a ton of whiskey and take up smoking ;)
@FirePrince: I'm a bit confused. My review is segmented going Story, Gameplay, Multiplayer, Presentation, Conclusion. The white transitions are my segment indicators. Unless you want a big flashy graphic that pops up and goes " STORY*, which I can't do cause I don't know how to make those
By the way, I love the example you showed with the sound, because I noticed that sticking out as well. 5:43 to 5:48. "I loved the example he showed for bad voice acting, that man-and-his-wife scene made me physically cringe for about a full minute when I played it.
" @CaptainCody: Trust me, I was realllly scared that would happen when I posted my Homefront reivew as well as this one. Thankfully the GB community is awesome "lol I remember another dude that made a not so good video review, posted it here and got flamed to hell
" @CraigAA said:
" @CaptainCody: Trust me, I was realllly scared that would happen when I posted my Homefront reivew as well as this one. Thankfully the GB community is awesome "lol I remember another dude that made a not so good video review, posted it here and got flamed to hell "
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