well sir,
I think your review was well written, had a good pace, nothing you said was repetitive, it was informative, to the point, subjects were well grouped, you stuck to the facts (by not saying stuff like "I hate this part of the game because I hate milk")
You spoke well, everything you were saying was well represented by the video and the 720p was a fantastic touch. All in alll, very professional.
Criticism:
Your opening music sucks. Your voice sounds really nerdy. Make your voice sound cooler. Like Sam Jackson in Pulp Fiction.
Where's your gimmick? I can get this same review from anyone. Why come to you? The Angry Video Game Nerd has a gimmick. He's angry. You should make some funny jokes like: "You can split a zombie and get more blood than a 13-year-old virgin prostitute." That could be your gimmick.
You know what reviews could use? A pie chart at the end, that represents 2 things: the good and the bad of the game, thus letting us know quickly and visually how much of an impact the flaws of a game have on the game's experience.
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