It's great that you're practicing your English. The story was so riveting I decided to make an audiobook version of it:
Great. A very nice read. If I knew you will read it, I would took some time on phrasing it better. Heh, I just wrote it down in like 5 minutes. I will now use some more energy if I make a sequel
I weirdly enjoyed reading this. The english may not be perfect but I think that adds to it.
I was such a nerd, that I actually played on RP server on WOW. I played a orc, so it was a bonus to not having perfect english.
I heard those pesky nords like to spill their guts after a mead and a glimpse of the local bar wench. Then they spread it out that your a wife-killer. It is the Night Mother that appear in the womens dreams. But it if you knock them out and carry them to your house. Lock them up in the kitchen. Otherwise women clothing can simulate women. Just take some clothes and cook your own meal. Throw some septims on the table. Then you have the advantage to not listen to their sillly comments.
I probably will kill Janessa. Or live her on the top of mountain. Once it took 3 days for her find her way to me. She is hopeless mapreader.