Or delete one of them.
Good: http://www.giantbomb.com/the-legend-of-dragoon/61-13180/
Bad: http://www.giantbomb.com/the-legend-of-dragoon/61-21381/
Merge 2 "Legend of Dragoon"
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I love Legend of Dragoon as much as anyone (absolutely the most underrated RPG on the PlayStation), but man! What a plot summary.
Shouldn't we try to cut that down... a lot? That's insanely long. The formatting is a little off, but that can be forgiven of course. I'm just not exactly comfortable (personally) with that kind of length.
Just sayin'.
"Yeah I couldn't get the formatting exact but, that's like the entire story. Someone should write a way shortened down version. Then people will have options. (Even though everyone will want to read the short one :)"Heh, well--I can't say it isn't informative. That is just about the entire story.
I'll have 1,000 points by night's end (estimating, but hey), so I may give it a shot if you don't mind.
Slightly off-topic, but I did the write-ups for a number of pages here. A few examples:
Parasite Eve
Parasite Eve II
Resident Evil: The Umbrella Chronicles
Extermination
I have an idea on how to divide the plot into more succinct sections, but still retaining the overall feel of it. It's likely important that we don't include too much information past a reasonable portion of the game (I usually gauge it at about the three hour mark, as I think it's fair game prior to that).
That's the direction I would go with it, so if you don't mind, I can take a stab at it.
I actually asked Vinny about including information past certain points and spoilers and such and he said that if something is a story summary, it should have it all a.k.a. a summary. So you can divide it up if you don't chop it down a TON. That took me forever to write so I would like to keep most of the length but if you want to cut it down some that's ok. I looked at your other write-ups and their good but I don't want the LOD one cut down nearly as much though since I put my heart and soul into that thing.
Jesus Ross, did you write that whole In-Depth plot section out of your ass? That thing is incredible man.
I've seen guys get like 4000 points for one page, for not writing stuff anywhere near that. (MS Word bug)
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