Gears of War 2 Walkthrough (In progress)

Hi guys, don't know if this is the right place for this, but just wanted to let you know that I am working on a walkthrough for Gears of War 2. Would very much apprechiate if you left me some comments on how you think it is, or any constructive tips and feedback :)

Cheers!

http://www.giantbomb.com/guides/gears-of-war-2-walkthrough/633/