So as very few people know, I've been writing a 'novel' of sorts since around 2006 (around easter I think), but now I am stuck and I need help. Basically I have finished writing the story, I've read over it about six times and edited each read through. But I feel I haven't fleshed out the characters enough and I need to find a way to insert emotions into the story without sounding like it was never there in the first place (in short, awkward). I have read the blog(s) Through a Writer's eyes (will edit in the authors username) and I have found it is good advice, but it hasn't fully covered my predicament.
So, seeing as no other human being has even read this 'transcript' I need help adding character to the characters.