Fanfiction I wrote, tell me what you think.

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#1  Edited By DualReaver

Blaze of Glory


Vaxadrin sneaks up behind gently rubs his quietly whispers

Vaxadrin
strokes Black Rose'

Vaxadrin
meets Black Rose's lips

Vaxadrin
and Black rose escalate

Vaxadrin
and Black Rose lock lips

Vaxadrin
ignores DualReaver

Vaxadrin
climbs onto all

Vaxadrin
gets thrown out

Vaxadrin
has his corpse violently has Life Regen lv4

Vaxadrin
is told by Brukaoru,

Vaxadrin
runs back inside

Vaxadrin
then smears the lights the feces

Vaxadrin
masturbates to the

Vaxadrin
turns to DualReaver,

Vaxadrin
blinds DualReaver puts on his hat
Special thanks to Vaxadrin. Without you I don't think this would've been possible.
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#2  Edited By Black_Rose

What did i get myself into >_>

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#3  Edited By tokyochicken

omg DR lol I dont know what you say 

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#4  Edited By brukaoru

I didn't know I was a white mage.

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#5  Edited By Black_Rose

Seriously dude, this is not helping my image >_>

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Best topic ever. LMAO.

Oh, and inb4lock

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#7  Edited By OGCartman

Lmao

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#8  Edited By Vaxadrin

What the fuck is this shit?

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#9  Edited By Carlos

Aw im not in it T_T

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#10  Edited By Hulk

This story would be more realistic if brukaoru was elbow dropping babies.

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#11  Edited By Virago

Wow. That sounds more like fanreallife than fanfiction.

And i'm heartbroken i wasn't mentioned.
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Virago said:
"Wow. That sounds more like fanreallife than fanfiction.
And i'm heartbroken i wasn't mentioned.
"
I already have a novel with you in the works. Don't worry. =P
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#13  Edited By Systech

I am currently starring in a fan-fiction with serious cat. It's great.

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#14  Edited By brukaoru
Hulk said:
"This story would be more realistic if brukaoru was elbow dropping babies."
I don't hurt babies, I've never physically hurt anyone! Why do you hate me so much that you are creating these lies?!

 *cries*
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#15  Edited By DualReaver
Virago said:
"Wow. That sounds more like fanreallife than fanfiction."
You don't even want to know how close that is to being true.
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#16  Edited By Hulk
brukaoru said:
"Hulk said:
"This story would be more realistic if brukaoru was elbow dropping babies."
I don't hurt babies, I've never physically hurt anyone! Why do you hate me so much that you are creating these lies?!

 *cries*"
If we let your baby bashing go unchecked now, when will it end?  The fate of the human race is at stake.  Because as you once said, "Baby bashing is much more fun than clubbing seals.  Seals can take up to a hour to club to death, while it only takes one good hit to decapitate a 2 year old."
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#17  Edited By Vaxadrin

Alright Bru, you're taking this way too far.  This has just become flat out inappropriate.

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#18  Edited By brukaoru
Hulk said:
"If we let your baby bashing go unchecked now, when will it end?  The fate of the human race is at stake.  Because as you once said, "Baby bashing is much more fun than clubbing seals.  Seals can take up to a hour to club to death, while it only takes one good hit to decapitate a 2 year old.""
I've never said that! I don't want abuse to happen to any human, animal or plant! That's not funny at all, that is evil~!

Just cause you hate me doesn't mean you have to create lies about me! *cries more*
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#19  Edited By Hulk
brukaoru said:
"Hulk said:
"If we let your baby bashing go unchecked now, when will it end?  The fate of the human race is at stake.  Because as you once said, "Baby bashing is much more fun than clubbing seals.  Seals can take up to a hour to club to death, while it only takes one good hit to decapitate a 2 year old.""
I've never said that! I don't want abuse to happen to any human, animal or plant! That's not funny at all, that is evil~!

Just cause you hate me doesn't mean you have to create lies about me! *cries more*"
[23:23] <Hulk> There are places where babies have been eaten, for example brukaoru's kitchen.
[23:24] <brukaoru> Hulk: Dang that's true


Many witnessed this.
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#20  Edited By Bulldog19892
This is totally happening right now.
This is totally happening right now.
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#21  Edited By Black_Rose
Hulk said:
"brukaoru said:
"Hulk said:
"If we let your baby bashing go unchecked now, when will it end?  The fate of the human race is at stake.  Because as you once said, "Baby bashing is much more fun than clubbing seals.  Seals can take up to a hour to club to death, while it only takes one good hit to decapitate a 2 year old.""
I've never said that! I don't want abuse to happen to any human, animal or plant! That's not funny at all, that is evil~!

Just cause you hate me doesn't mean you have to create lies about me! *cries more*"
[23:23] <Hulk> There are places where babies have been eaten, for example brukaoru's kitchen.
[23:24] <brukaoru> Hulk: Dang that's true


Many witnessed this."
I was there when it happened
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#22  Edited By brukaoru
Hulk said:
"[23:23] <Hulk> There are places where babies have been eaten, for example brukaoru's kitchen.
[23:24] <brukaoru> Hulk: Dang that's true


Many witnessed this."
THAT WAS IN REFERENCE TO SOMETHING ELSE!
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#23  Edited By Vaxadrin

<brukaoru>    ;__;
<Vaxadrin>    godhand, does brukaoru kick babies?
<godhand>    why does bru punch babies?
<Vaxadrin>    she punches babies, godhand? that's just wrong
<godhand>    supermooseman puts up force field full of babies, godhand on me that stand up to the checkout counter
<systech>    that's such a supermooseman thing to do

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#24  Edited By Pleasureizmine

+1 lol

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#25  Edited By tokyochicken

Ahh everyone bask in the greatness that is the GB IRC.

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#30  Edited By tokyochicken

<brukaoru> I DRINK BABIES BLOOD LIKE MILK!

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#31  Edited By brukaoru

YEAH! THOSE BABIES DESERVED IT!

BURN, BABY, BURN!

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#32  Edited By Vaxadrin

Inappropriate, Bru.  This is a serious thread, no dead baby jokes here.

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#33  Edited By tokyochicken

<brukaoru> A mac made out of babies!

<brukaoru> SUPER BABY MAC!
<brukaoru> I don't have a MacBookPro, I have a MACBABYPRO!

Macs run by baby blood...Think Different.
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#34  Edited By Lies

We've just put a jihad on Sarah Palin for killing supermooseman :(

Her and her damn irrational hatred of meese.

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#35  Edited By Emilio
Bulldog19892 said:
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This is totally happening right now.
This is totally happening right now.
"

True.

This is missing some homoerotic Sonic/Tails love, though. No fan fiction is complete without Sonic.
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#38  Edited By brukaoru

Beast cooked, cook those babies like a beast!

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#39  Edited By DualReaver

Thanks for all the comments guys.
I got something else in the works so be on the look out later this week!

P.S
I fucking love you Vax.

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#40  Edited By brukaoru

Another fic?!

If it has babies being burnt, it will be the greatest fiction of all time!

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#41  Edited By Vaxadrin
Dude...what the fuck...
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#43  Edited By Joker

What the fuck did I just read?

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#44  Edited By Rowr

ahaha awesome.

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#45  Edited By RandomHero666

hahaha what a fun thread, and an awesome Story DualReaver.

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#46  Edited By Giantkitty
Lies said:
"We've just put a jihad on Sarah Palin for killing supermooseman :(

Her and her damn irrational hatred of meese."

I'm picking up a pattern here. Maybe moose horn contains Palinite? They sold her a bridge for $25 million?
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#47  Edited By Jayge_

What the fuck is this shit?

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#48  Edited By mike
Jayge said:
"What the fuck is this shit?"
A locked thread?