I wrote my first article for a sports website called "BleacherReport". Apparently the guys in charge liked it enough to make it a featured article.
I need some unbiased opinions on an article I wrote. US Football
Just a quick note for the future, I think you use too many commas. Haven't finished the article yet- will edit when I do.
" Just a quick note for the future, I think you use too many commas. Haven't finished the article yet- will edit when I do.Yeah I like commas. It's a bad habit that I've always had.Edit: Doesn't seem biased at all to me. Your scoring methods are transparent and you gave detailed explanations for every point category. Someone might say that you specifically chose those categories and point distribution methods because you knew beforehand that Auburn would come out on top, but that would be stupid and honestly you don't seem like someone who would do that."
Well, the "best college running back program" is always going to be debatable, but it is still a pretty solid article. You presented all of your evidence and statistics in a clean, and good fashion to argue that the best college running back program is Auburn. It definitely isn't bias either, you just so happen to like a school that is statistically the best. When it comes to the commas, I used to do that often. To be fair, I still use a considerable amount of commas. Good article and congratulations on well...the congratulations by your other writers.
This is a solid article with undisputed facts/statistics to back up your findings. I can't find anything in there that shows you are biased one way or the other. Honestly, your scoring system in certain parts shows more favor to USC and Miami because you add different scoring criteria to "allow" Miami and USC to somewhat catch up to Auburn. However, they fail because, undoubtedly, Auburn is the better Running Back U. I love the article and I whole heartedly agree with what you wrote even before I knew the exact statistics. Keep up the great work!
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