All of them are either extremely poorly written, or just plagiarized from Wikipedia. You are helping absolutely no one with your abysmal reviews.
Perhaps this was too mean. I think you should absolutely continue writing your reviews, only if you actually take your time with them. Your reviews offer no explanation of why the game is either good or bad, are poorly written, and you make too many mistakes. Also, ripping off wikipedia articles is completely ridiculous and not accepted on this site.
Instead of pumping out 5 shitty reviews a day, put 5 days into each review. Not only will you spare people the horror that is your current reviews, you'll also get better at writing.
" @artofwar420: I agree. Instead of just saying that his reviews suck, we should offer more constructive criticism so he knows how to improve his writing. "
Well half of his reviews are just wikipedia articles copy and pasted.
" @artofwar420: I agree. Instead of just saying that his reviews suck, we should offer more constructive criticism so he knows how to improve his writing. "
All he needs to do is read. Then write. Then read some more. Then write some more.
Find a couple of people who's writing you like, and then... just read. Feel their rhythm. See what words and expressions they use. Then write, and review your work. If you notice any flaws, remember them so you don't make the same mistakes in your future writing. Just keep reading and writing, and as long as you actually try, you'll get better and better.
EDIT: Oh, and if you can find someone who's able and willing to edit your work, that does wonders. Sadly, I don't have that pleasure, so I'm not nearly as good a writer as I'd like to be... if you have the opportunity to have someone edit your work, you should definitely take it(if you want to improve your writing, that is).
I know I'm not the greatest at writing or reviewing, so in saying that, just take your time and don't copy wiki anymore, even if your next review sucks and everyone gives it thumbs down, atleast you tried and your writing will get better as you continue.
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