I wanted to get an outsiders opinion on my "Let's Play" Commentary. I started to live stream pretty regularly, and enjoying it greatly. I am a bit of a stickler on improving my stream, and growing my audience so I am always looking for input. I've decided to do a few "Let's Play" commentaries to gain attention for myself, and my live stream.
This is my first attempt at one. I picked Black Ops because it was quick, easy, and people tend to like to watch COD games with commentary. Instead of focusing on the game I decided to give advice on what I learned so far in my pursuit of gaining a live stream audience. This was done in one take, and totally off the cuff. I did that to get a real raw estimate of my commentary skills.
Some of my loyal followers in my live stream are very helpful, but if I want to grow I have to put myself out there. The GB community seems like a good place to get great takes on this, but not just "you suck, OMG another commentator" type comments constantly. Am I speaking to fast, to slow, stumbling over my words to much, and other things I would like to know.
Do I think I am going to make a living off of this? Absolutely not. Do I hope to get noticed enough to make the enough to pay for gas? I hope so. Willing to give it a shot. Haha!
So here is the video, and thank you all ahead of time for you input.
EDIT: Re-Uploaded video in order to fix the low audio issue: