Jim Raynor Forum

Jim Raynor is a character that appears in 8 games

WHO CHANGED THE BLURB?!

Topic started by Mooshu on July 28, 2008. Last post by asian_pride 1 year, 2 months ago.
Post by Mooshu (206 posts) See mini bio
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Who ever did needs a beat down. It was perfect, now it's ruined. It must be changed back.


Post by MOLE (187 posts) See mini bio
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I did


Post by Psynapse (598 posts) See mini bio
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Mooshu, i beleive that your blurb was pointless... no offence... The information has to be relevant to the page, not just 'this is jimmy' or whatever you had there.


Post by twenty0ne (2,711 posts) See mini bio
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MOLE said:
"I did"
No, I did...


Post by Psynapse (598 posts) See mini bio
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twenty0ne said:
"MOLE said:
"I did"
No, I did...
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No i am Sparticus!


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Psynapse said:
"twenty0ne said:
"MOLE said:
"I did"
No, I did...
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No i am Sparticus!"
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Post by Mooshu (206 posts) See mini bio
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Psynapse said:
"Mooshu, i beleive that your blurb was pointless... no offence... The information has to be relevant to the page, not just 'this is jimmy' or whatever you had there."
First off, I didn't originally add that blurb. Someone in the Giant Bomb office did. Second, it totally is relevant to the page because it IS Jimmy. Third, it was funny, and part of the point of this site is to have fun, which is why we have an entire page devoted to hamburgers. Fourth, if people want more information they can read the article.. the blurb isn't supposed to tell you the whole story. The current blurb basically describes the entire first sentence of the article, thus making the current blurb dry, pointless, and unamusing.

EDIT: Disregard that last sentence, the blurb has changed since then... the current one is better, if a bit wordy.


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Post by Mooshu (206 posts) See mini bio
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The original blurb was "This is Jimmy." without the quotation marks.


Post by DualReaver (3,433 posts) See mini bio

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Mooshu said:
"The original blurb was "This is Jimmy." without the quotation marks."
lool whut?
lool whut?


Post by Paul (224 posts) See mini bio

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Changed it back, bitches. 


Post by asian_pride (274 posts) See mini bio

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Alright calm down I'll take out the quotation marks.


Post by Riddler (1,318 posts) See mini bio

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i did


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Psynapse said:
"twenty0ne said:
"MOLE said:
"I did"
No, I did...
"

No i am Sparticus!"
I can't believe no-one carried this on any further. Oh well, now is as good of a time as any:

NO I'M SPARTACUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Post by Riddler (1,318 posts) See mini bio

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MattyFTM said:
"Psynapse said:
"twenty0ne said:
"MOLE said:
"I did"
No, I did...
"

No i am Sparticus!"
I can't believe no-one carried this on any further. Oh well, now is as good of a time as any:

NO I'M SPARTACUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
no im your father


Post by Mooshu (206 posts) See mini bio
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No, thats not needed. This topic was about what it was before I changed it back to "This is Jimmy" without the quotation marks.


The Quotation marks are fine.


Post by Giantkitty (354 posts) See mini bio

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[Mooshu]
>it totally is relevant to the page because it IS Jimmy

While true, the definition is awfully circular. That would almost be like opening a dictionary and seeing "a pear is a pear." They're not being false, but it isn't helpful. As a contributer, I understand the desire for humor, but the blurb is to give an overview of the subject, not to see how clever you are. I reference a lot of things here and like the summary so I don't have to read the description to see what's it all about. I have little idea who the character is, so I don't know if  "This is Jimmy" is "part" of the game or not. If it is, I'd say "This is Jimmy" then go on to describe him briefly and mention the games he's in. I'd rather have it a bit long winded (it can only be up to 50 words), than be cutesy and say almost nothing.
One exception could be something so common, you really don't have to say much about it. if someone made a pie page and someone just typed "I like pie" I wouldn't mind because pretty much everyone knows what pie is. Not that many people know who Jimmy is to warrant that.


Post by asian_pride (274 posts) See mini bio

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Mooshu said:
"No, thats not needed. This topic was about what it was before I changed it back to "This is Jimmy" without the quotation marks.


The Quotation marks are fine."
Well alright then I'll change it back





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