Not necessarily in content, but it looks terribly sloppy at the moment, with incredibly long paragraphs and pictures thrown in haphazardly. We need to get it arranged into something more pleasing on the eyes.

Gimme till the end of this week to finish up with the story..once we have everything in place we can start the edit process and condense it more if you like. Also, do you have any specific portions that you wanna tweak?

what artical?

i just added the volus and the elcor to the article, gonna wait to see if it pass thru the moderation.

"Not necessarily in content, but it looks terribly sloppy at the moment, with incredibly long paragraphs and pictures thrown in haphazardly. We need to get it arranged into something more pleasing on the eyes.
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I don't understand...you say it needs cleaning up, but you post in the forum instead of cleaning it up yourself? You're Mr. "I've contributed to over a 1000 games" right.