@XII_Sniper: Man, I love that video. I just got the impression that Vinny had no clue what that song was. Nothing is harder then when a random song comes on in Rock Band and you need to read the lyrics and guess how it's sung.
This isn't a book. The first chapter would fill maybe two pages in a real book? Maybe? No offense mate, but you're going for quantity rather then quality. The writing is very poor, it looks like something a teenager might write.