I'm thinking about submitting a little story I wrote to Kindle Singles just to see how it all goes. But this is the first creative work I've ever written and have no idea if I did this all correctly. I'm worried about things like pacing, tone, punctuation, the flow of the narrative. Also I have no idea how to create a title. So I'm asking for help here. Anyone want to help me by reading through it for errors, creative and other-wise, and maybe throw me some titles before I submit it? I could send you an e-mail with my current draft. Just PM me your e-mail address.

Thanks dudes.