I like the intimate quality of the production. I think it's an essential quality for this type of recording- one that relies solely on voice and guitar. Your voice is nice but it feels restrained. I'm a big fan of baritone singers (i.e. The National, Silver Jews), and you definitely have potential, but your voice feels like it's drowned out by playing it safe. Maybe if the vocals were more prominent in the production stage. Again, you definitely have talent! Keep it up.