Pros: The verses are alight in regards to concepts and floe (for the most part), beat selection is good given the circumstances of a 1st song (not too complicated but still has some depth in it), good use of maintaining a coherent story without resorting to lackluster rhyming patters or word selection.
Cons: Obviously the sound levels are very off, there are various times where your voice is drowned out by the beat or you sound like you run out of breath to continue clear enunciating, the end break is pretty lackluster, the hook is....ok...maybe....it seems like you could tighten it up some.
Overall, it was cool. By no means would I say call up Stone's Throw or Def Jux but it is something you can take some pride in. At least in my opinion.
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