These Need Work
These pages have poor grammar, formatting, need updated information, are poorly written, contain second person, opinionated, etc.
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1. Super Mario Kart
Reads like a fan gushing over it in several parts, poorly written. Also written in past tense, for some reason.
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2. Sonic the Hedgehog
Second person
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3. Super Mario World
Formatting, misguided information (e.g. information about Super Mario Advance)
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4. Pilotwings
Formatting
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5. F-Zero
Could use some images
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6. The Legend of Zelda: A Link to the Past
Grammatical touch-ups
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7. Streets of Rage 2
Broken images
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8. Star Fox
Image formatting
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9. Sonic CD
"Time Attack Mode" section completely missing
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10. Uniracers
Could use some images in the body, more information about gameplay, possibly some links.
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11. Earthworm Jim
Formatting, second person
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12. Super Mario 64
Tiny bit of second person
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13. GoldenEye 007
Replace all instances of "Goldeneye" with "GoldenEye"
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14. Pokémon Red/Blue
Expand the overview section slightly with a little more information
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15. Dungeons & Dragons: Tower of Doom
Formatting, poor sentence construction. I think I'll just redo this whole page.
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16. Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone
Weirdly worded body, definitely needs work.
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17. MechAssault
Opinionated overview section
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18. Jump Super Stars
Needs work in formatting/rewriting, new blurb too
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19. Banjo-Tooie
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20. Half-Life 2
Releases need to be sorted out
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