These Need Work
These pages have poor grammar, formatting, need updated information, are poorly written, contain second person, opinionated, etc.
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Reads like a fan gushing over it in several parts, poorly written. Also written in past tense, for some reason.
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Second person
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Formatting, misguided information (e.g. information about Super Mario Advance)
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Formatting
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Could use some images
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Grammatical touch-ups
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Broken images
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Image formatting
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"Time Attack Mode" section completely missing
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Could use some images in the body, more information about gameplay, possibly some links.
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Formatting, second person
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Tiny bit of second person
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Replace all instances of "Goldeneye" with "GoldenEye"
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Expand the overview section slightly with a little more information
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Formatting, poor sentence construction. I think I'll just redo this whole page.
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Weirdly worded body, definitely needs work.
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Opinionated overview section
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Needs work in formatting/rewriting, new blurb too
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Releases need to be sorted out
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