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@dbol said:

I made the Eorlund Gray-Mane article more inclusive and accurate, removed redundancies and fixed all grammatical errors and spelling errors. Title should be changed from "Eorlund Gray-mane" to "Eorlund Gray-Mane".

None of the changes I made will appear until a few hours because they need to be approved.

Sweet...

You are right about the title, I will request a change.

@talkingtoast said:

Done. Hopefully my work on the Riverwood page will be approved.

Good work. Will look closer into to it later. Cheers..

Edit:

Everyone can help a lot by just providing images to the articles. There is points to earn for the points whores ;-) Many of the capitols have bad or none image attached to their article.

I will dig around see if we have more articles that are either small or have none information.

Cheers,

Daniel

@LordXavierBritish said:

My work here is done.

Thanks a lot :)

As some noticed I work on the articles concerning Whiterun and nearby things, for example the guilds the companions and the circle. I would love for all that can help me with grammar and spelling correction as my mother language is not English. If you can post in this thread when you done something. Myself are about 1 month until I leave Whiterun and move to a new area.

So if you wanna focus on something there are both locations, concept and characters that needs some love.

Here is the need some love list:

• Ulfric Stormcloak
• Stormcloaks
• Riften
• College of Winterhold (location)
• College of Winterhold (Concept)
• Dragonsreach
• Riverwood

I need some help with spelling and grammar correction on following articles:

• The Circle
• The Companions
• Kodlak Whitemane
• Skyforge
• Eorlund Gray-mane

Also feel free to share your work on the articles, I am quite fast writer. I will help you, I am good at formating and designs. So if you need help just post here. I hope this will spark interest. After all you all earn some wiki points ;-)

@Psycosis:

Entertaining article, keep up with this good stuff.

@Psycosis,

His stuff is just great

I bought it for 20 €.

I hope it will be better than this threads comments..

Thanks for including some of my work, it is a great site so it is all about giving back.

Also I maybe will have a shot at that 1000 profile views quests. (around 180 something I think)

Thanks for featuring some of my work. Makes is more fun when my hours of writing counts for something. Couldn't be able to do without all nice people that doesn't have English as a second language, that can check my grammar and spelling.

I will do my best to write up more articles with better substance.

Cheers all,

Daniel, Sweden

Will it live up to my standards . . .

This is one of the games I have been looking forward for. Who doesn't want look like a gray-haired young man with a sword on his back. I am mostly interested in the quests and character system. Hopefully it can live up to my expectations. I need a good story. Hopefully it is not a to much hack and slash adventure. I read about the detective quests, those was the one that caught my interest for game.

Also it would be great it have some depth. I like details. Like the saying, the devil is in the details.

Feel free to comment and discuss.

@zombie2011 said:

Because if you leave it for later you will forget about the context the quest was given to you. For example i have a quest that says retrieve a sword for _________ i don't know why i'm doing it when i got it all, i know is that it's in my log. I'm sure when i got the quest the guy gave some explanation to why he wants the sword, but i don't remember. It's at this point the quest becomes boring, without the story i don't really care about the quest enough to do it.

I play in same kind of style. I always concentrate at one quest line at the time. Thou I sometimes get a quest I had no idea that I had got it. Thou I check online. But I understand your reasoning. Why get a quest if it just a fetch that, kill that and discover that. For me personally I want be immersed into the game. But many items and places also have lore found in books and by speaking with people. The details with quests is what make it fun. Otherwise it be enough with radiant quests only ;-)