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#1 Posted by Atary77 (502 posts) -

Hey folks, posted my first review on here and was wondering if I could get some constructive criticism on what I could improve in the hopes of being a better writer. So no BS comments simply saying that this sucks or anything. Be CONSTRUCTIVE!

http://www.giantbomb.com/rise-of-the-triad/3030-39195/user-reviews/2200-26374

Thanks!

#2 Edited by Fredchuckdave (5333 posts) -

Did you ask your 10 year old nephew why there was so much useless military jargon in the shooters he plays? Bravo six actual five by five FUBAR Demo fucking Dick.

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