Good stuff.
You're probably only making this harder for them if they do eventually change the title.
@brandonleedy: Option 2 for me. This is some dope work duder. Great job!
Original but with the dirty letters. Let's not stretch this beep beep joke thinner than it already is.
@brandonleedy: Option 2 looks best in my opinion. Great work, duder!
Love it, I also love how you made the truck a Tri-axle as if to say that a regular tandem axle is just not enough to handle this load.
@brandonleedy: Option 2, for sure. Love the colour and texture. Kerning could be better, but that's finicky biz. I think the font is fine, the leading is fine and I dig the pixelated beep-beep.
Great work duder.
@brandonleedy: This is so gorgeous...some ideas potentially- a bomb on the side of the cab (or something else relating to the logo) and a silhouette with a Klepek-fro inside. Just throwing them out there. Top notch work.
@brandonleedy: Actually, you know what would be pretty funny: if the truck bed was in "dumping" position, and a bit of the cassette tape's tape was starting to unravel out of the back.
I also thought it would be great if this thing was just dumping a pile of tangled tape out the back. Also, maybe if the wheels were a bit closer in the back and there was more of an overhang of the bumper in the front.
@brandonleedy: Actually, you know what would be pretty funny: if the truck bed was in "dumping" position, and a bit of the cassette tape's tape was starting to unravel out of the back.
I also thought it would be great if this thing was just dumping a pile of tangled tape out the back. Also, maybe if the wheels were a bit closer in the back and there was more of an overhang of the bumper in the front.
Yeah love the concept but if it would fit in the space I'd love to see that extra little detail as well.
@brandonleedy: I like option 1 or 3 (is there a difference other than the slight transparency in the title?)
Personal preference; i would practice more simplicity by centering the truck vertically, writing "*GIANT BOMB*" on the tape and cutting the title out completely.
Great concept, i like it.
@brandonleedy: Option 3 I like
@brandonleedy: Psst, the tape is upside down so the text should be too :P
@brandonleedy: Excellent work but I would get rid of the beep beep on the tape. I liked the one in the OP the most.
@thecreamfilling: Doesn't need one, since this truck is always dumpin' interviews, it'll only be going in reverse. ;) Also, I didn't draw it.
@thewonderwaffle: & @meatdimensionfighter:Yeah I wish I had more space to add details like Patrick, but when shrunk to the phone size, Patrick instead looked like broccoli driving a dump truck, haha.
@big_jon: Ha you hit the nail on the head. I was originally drawing a regular old dump truck, and then I realized I should just go heavy duty. Who knows how many interviews will need to be dumptrucked? This rig needs to handle it!
@brewmaster_andy:This use of cartoon Patrick is pretty awesome! I wish I had room to fit him into the design.
@chavtheworld: People keep saying it's upside down, but I always remember my old cassettes having the labels like this. But I'm sure in the history of cassettes there were probably ones in the opposite direction too. To each their own, I guess.
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Thanks for all the feedback you guys! I sent Patrick Option 2 and a link to the rest so he could see 'em all. He really liked it and said he'd get with Jeff to see what's up about using it!
So whenever(/if?) it ends up on the feed, this was a lot of fun. Glad to have a cool back and forth with you all and even get to know a few of you in PM's too!
Thanks again everyone!
I personally think having "Beep Beep" in the image is superfluous and sort of takes away the fun of using that onomatopoeia to indicate the podcast. I'd probably just have the header text be "Interview Dump Truck" and have Giant Bomb with the bomb logo on the cassette in place of "Beep Beep", but it's a strong image none the less. Nice work.
I agree with @darknessmyoldfriend first one is gold but I'd keep it as is and put a GB logo in the corner.
Awesome work duder! I'm late to the party so I don't know if you're past the point of revision, but my only critiques would be to lighten the weight of the BEEP BEEP (reversed type always looks bolder so you could probably set it in bold or regular if that typeface has it, instead of black), and maybe to try having Interview Dumptruck be on one line in a smaller size underneath Giant Bomb. Oh and if you did want the to reference the GB logo you could make the "O" in Bomb a silhouette of a bomb. Looks sharp, great stuff!
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