First review:

And after reading it once, posted. Then read it again. Missed a bunch of typos.
 
/facepalm

And after reading it once, posted. Then read it again. Missed a bunch of typos.
 
/facepalm

That's not going to give a great impression of you. I'm guessing there's no edit button of sorts is there? As far as I know you can only get it removed if you ask a mod, that aside there's not much you can do.