I'm making a web comic! What do you think?

First pages and cover for the first chapter of the web comic I'm working on. It is called Kodomo ("Kids" in japanese). I won't say much about the plot and characters but basically, it's going to be a weekly page showing the strange and bizarre adventures of two homeless bastard kids as they traverse the old city in their quest to find happyness. The year is 20XX and this is their story. You can visit http://kodomostory.tumblr.com/ if your interested. I'll be uploading more pages often, hope you all enjoy them.

First pages and cover for the first chapter of the web comic I'm working on. It is called Kodomo ("Kids" in japanese). I won't say much about the plot and characters but basically, it's going to be a weekly page showing the strange and bizarre adventures of two homeless bastard kids as they traverse the old city in their quest to find happyness. The year is 20XX and this is their story. You can visit http://kodomostory.tumblr.com/ if your interested. I'll be uploading more pages often, hope you all enjoy them.

Page #4!

Yes! That's exactly what I'm aiming for and there is a reason later on in the story for the rapid growth. These are kids in the bodies of grown ups, I use that to reflect the world around them. It takes some getting used to but that's my goal. I'm glad you like it!

Most of the backgrounds don't have much in them so it's hard to get a sense of the world they live in, but overall it's pretty impressive stuff. Nice work. I see what you did with kodomo/wakai there ;)

@CaLe: Thanks a lot! That's a good observation. I want to get a feel for that with the situations that take place and the characters though, I'm not that good at working with environments so I work with what I have, the best way I can. I get most people won't like it at first but I hope it grows with them once they start getting into the story and the over the top character development. I'm taking this pretty casual though, mostly as a way to keep myself from getting bored. I hope to eventually take this more seriously, I'm not sure yet.

Pages 5 and 6! Any more feedback would be great. Also, are you liking the story so far? It's still very early but it's getting there.