Yeah the idea was that it would be a bear attack that is hardcore and since it's for a HC punk band it would also mean that the attack is in itself hardcore music related. I don't really mind if it's a bit off grammar wise, it tends to be a fun thing amongst a lot of bands to knowingly write stuff that way.
Can you split that into two parts? So one word is hardcore and the other bear attack or does it break at that point? And what are the rules for writing in vertical lines?
I'll post a picture so you see what it looks like at this point.
Room 237 is great. What i love most is how the film never comes out and say "Look at these nutty people people and their crackpot theories!". They let them speak for themselves, i found that refreshing in this type of documentary.