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#1 Posted by zonedakid (3 posts) -
hey everyone i was wondering if you could check out my games commentary with the binding of isaac wrath of the lamb specifically wrath of the lamb i took some constructive criticism from people on what i can do better to improve my commentating and i was wondering if you all could help me out ill leave the link in the first episode to wrath of the lamb below thank you for helping me tell me what you think thanks
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#2 Edited by smitty86 (708 posts) -

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Also flagged.

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#3 Posted by captain_max707 (634 posts) -

I think you should try implementing some better grammar. It'll help people take you more seriously.  Also, usually threads like this can get shut down because there's really not much room for discussion, you're just promoting your own video (which isn't even here). 
Otherwise, welcome!

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#4 Posted by trace (3741 posts) -

Please don't advertise on Giant Bomb. Thanks!

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