@andrew2696:
Ok so since someone gave a bit more criticism and you took it well I will go over all editing criticism I have, I aint no true expert and while you may not go back to editing there is still stuff to pick up for ANYTHING you do with keeping people's attention. I took media and communication which did not teach me anything AT ALL about editing just told "ok I want a project video from you...." that was it.
This was my video complete with errors and what not so you ain't alone, first part is minimally edited, last third of part 2 was edited quite a bit.
I am a far better editor nowadays with some guidance from editor friends, PS I ain't a serious editor I took it up as a hobby for a summer for AMV Hell 7 and I have not edited shit since....however I was an asshole and would criticise EVERY CLIP in Amv Hell 6 (rough cut) AMV Hell 6.66, AMV Hell 7 and all the AMV Hell Challenges.
Back to your own project which I am sure you probably know most of the errors in it anyways.
Great intro just lacking audio, would have been great to have the actual Giantbomb feature intro, download a GB video even super low mobile quality rip the audio section using audacity import to your program....probably not gonna be so easy.
A few seconds too much dead air/no visual, somthing I am gonna be saying is make things snappy and tighter, in the world of editing seconds are a long time and you will be going smaller time scales with a project.
However nice little intro sorta ruined by the created by vegas pro watermaker however I will not complain too much as your not gonna shell out loads of money for it.
Everything is fine till the gamespot footage were you left too much of the previous Kayne and lynch scene of "wake up wake up" with that cut it would be fine as well as the little Kayne and Lynch footage at the end.
The dead air after the Gerstmann clip nah nah you need stuff there. Anything could even do fade in and fade outs of web pages reporting "Gerstmann fired" just anything relevant.
There was also a little pause you took in your speech which is fine if you have something a little jazzy to look at that moment making a little "poignant" pause, or just edit your audio and cut it out, ever hurts to make it snappier.
Another little need of a trim on the clip before Ryan Davis which this could have worked out fine with more stuff in that black space.
Pretty fine on the Brad Shoemaker show up can be futzed to make it tighter and have have "Brad Shoemaker" turn up when you said his name, however that is just being fancier.
The silence on waiting for Vinny Caravella to show up was the nice idea like I was just saying but you could have edited the cars flashing past to let that part show up sooner and let no dead air happen as you waited for it.
Good good on the use of How to build a bomb footage, this was good in just being nice filler, that is what alot of editing is just filler however a little redundant to say "In their documentary "how to build a bomb" to be followed with Jeff also saying "This is how to build a bomb." and you did fade yourself out wee bit too soon. If you were going to go with this set up (which was less editing) than saying "in their documentary" then let Jeff say it or even re edit everything diffrent as you had the title card flash up, yourself announce followed with Jeff.
More black screen..... needs to go.also this staring at a Farming simulator screen is terrible without good audio, would have maybe been a good time to edit in something else then when you say about farming simulator cut to the clip you had with Vinny...also thinking about who you're presenting to is an idea, since I don't think there is many groups you would be showing this too would accept Vinny going "You're fucked" we are fine with it, just think who you're presenting too. Next part is good showing Vinny and Ryan's enjoyment.
Another long and no audio buuuuut.....I will side with you....editing software can be fucking weird and make this shit happen. You see that in my youtube review video and I re edited my project 9 times because IT KEPT GOING INSANE AND MAKING WEIRD GLITCHES!
A wee bit too much dead air when the footage comes back....to another menu which does not make good viewing, random shots of them running around in persona would have been good, again snappy, engaging and filler.
This bit about live streams after is actualy realy good and should be what you're doing more of the Iceland trip stuff is pretty decent untill you let Drews good editing taking place the blank audio moment saying "OR NORTH KOREA!" is realy startling, a perfect way to do that would be taking some of Drew's photos and saying a bit more like " One of their crews trip to the unusual vacation spot...North Korea." also you could have easily had you audio over then fade for the roller coaster part.
This bit on the podcast is better flowing into the animated clip and all this stuff is more what you should be doing same with the CSBi movie clip.
Ryan Davis part maybe a better clip than Ryan playing a guitar would have done, however the work on the rest of the stuff is good your making it engaging with the clips, snappy and some nice audio fade/choices so its none too jarring. It could be tighter but it was very good there should be more of that, as well as you ended up choosing the same idea as me with the whole gang together at the end of the clip.
Overall your audio script was pretty good, presenting was actualy very decent above average and of course you fluffed up however it was all decent not terrible.
One thing you could have done with the entire time....a tiny little background music to your own talking parts would make them pop a bit better, the entire project if made tighter and all those glitches erased would have been a solid "Pretty good". Which when I have said to people about their editing "This is terrible, there is no good qualities to this." then you're actualy getting good praise from me.
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