In keeping with the ongoing and awesome endurance run, and the fact that I had a graphics design project, I decided to make a Persona 4 box art, it had to be a sequel to an existing game or dvd so I had to make a new logo and I decided to go with Persona 4:FES since there hasn't been one yet.
I am posting this here because I could do with some feedback, I tried www.vgboxart.com but they havent yet replied and they are extremely critical.
Here it is:

The arm that goes over the TV looks weird, as if it's just there and not actually resting on the TV. Also, the hand on that arm looks really blurry too (like you feathered it when you were cutting it out or something). Other than that, it's not too bad.

Doesn't really look that appealing imo.

I kinda like it. Colors all work well together. And it of course looks consistent with the style of P4.

I quite like it, but I think it would be better if Souji's arm was partially inside the TV.

I like it, in fact it's better then the original, cause the real art is kind of a clusterfuck of colors and characters,

Looks good but yea I would have to agree that the arm over the tv is the only problem. It looks prosthetic if anything.

The colors pop, but its a rare combination of busy and distracting and yet, empty.  Its a really good fan art but I dont think it works as box art.

You know, I don't think *Your Name Here* is actually the main selling point of the game. He's not really that appealing up close, really. I would have put multiple characters on the box, like Teddie or Chie.

I like the colors a lot, but i think the background is kinda empty, maybe enlarge the title a bit or put something like Izanagi behind MC.

YOU DO NOT STRETCH CIRCULAR OBJECTS EVER! DON'T YOU KNOW THAT?

Anyway. Besides infuriating oval switches on the TV and maybe a bit fat scanlines it's fine. Logos kind of stand out more than they should but it's not your fault. Really love the background to.

i think it looks pritty good i like how the noise  of colour is there in the background and the main character is layered over it to make him stand out looking good

Loving these comments, I was really stuck becuase I knew somethings looked wrong but I didn't really have any ideas on how to fix them.