I Made Song For GIant Bomb!

It's been updated to Version 2, all the link's now direct you to the new edited version. 
 
Well it started as a song to annoy my friend's with, doing a shitty freestyle rap over it.
But after they went home I thought to myself "This is something I could imagen on a Giant Bomb video..." So its up for download, incase they or anyone want's it.
It's nothing serious, It took about 20 minutes in full production.  
 
Notes on the song: Retarted main riff, Zelda Ocarina lead, GARY NUMAN!
 
Its called Song For Giant Bomb
The only way I could manage to stream it was through Myspace, I cant embed the player but it is the first song on my page.
 
 Stream it from Myspace here
Download the mp3 from RapidShare here
Download the high quality wav file from Rapidshare here
 
 Edit: It is kinda pathetic that this is doing better than all my other stuff that Is serious for views *sigh* oh well at least I dont self promote or spam..

It's been updated to Version 2, all the link's now direct you to the new edited version. 
 
Well it started as a song to annoy my friend's with, doing a shitty freestyle rap over it.
But after they went home I thought to myself "This is something I could imagen on a Giant Bomb video..." So its up for download, incase they or anyone want's it.
It's nothing serious, It took about 20 minutes in full production.  
 
Notes on the song: Retarted main riff, Zelda Ocarina lead, GARY NUMAN!
 
Its called Song For Giant Bomb
The only way I could manage to stream it was through Myspace, I cant embed the player but it is the first song on my page.
 
 Stream it from Myspace here
Download the mp3 from RapidShare here
Download the high quality wav file from Rapidshare here
 
 Edit: It is kinda pathetic that this is doing better than all my other stuff that Is serious for views *sigh* oh well at least I dont self promote or spam..

The pitch shifting is really off putting for this song. It's best around the middle, when you have the light percussion and the melody going at the same time. It has a cute atmosphere, but I think the end is harsh. You definitely have written better songs (Ex: Fuck Stu).

See, I liked the second part of it better than the loopy horse-tranq first half! I was wondering where Gary Numan bit came in, and then laughed when it did.
 
As a piece of comedy music designed to annoy it's pretty successful. As a piece of music I'll listen to more than twice, it's a no-go. But I guess that's what you were going for, right?

" The pitch shifting is really off putting for this song. It's best around the middle, when you have the light percussion and the melody going at the same time. It has a cute atmosphere, but I think the end is harsh. You definitely have written better songs (Ex: Fuck Stu). "

thats some fucked up tune me breda ! 
 
very nice lolz

Its ridiculous! Giantbomb is good as it is! Dont try to improve it with you music! Its pure perfection. Its all there is. Giantbomb is everything it should be! Its not about you. Giantbomb is nothing you can identify with. 
Giantbomb is just Giantbomb.
Giantbom is Drew, Dave, Jeff, Vinny, Brad, Ryan etc....
 
What Giantbomb isnt:
 
Its not YOU!!! There is no you and Giantbomb. There is only Giantbomb!

No there is no.... seperation between a song for Giantbomb or a song that is Giantbomb. Everything what is Giantbomb is Giantbomb.
You cant become part of Giantbomb. Giantbomb is already perfect. It is all there is.
Your song is only attempting cause of your illusion of this possibility to be Giantbomb.
Your song cant attain that! It will only be YOUR song. And not Giantbomb. Not a song FOR Giantbomb.. and not anything related to Giantbomb!
All it can be is a ridiculous presentation of your thoughts and your illusionary self.
 
BUT NEVER GIANTBOMB!

" No there is no.... seperation between a song for Giantbomb or a song that is Giantbomb. Everything what is Giantbomb is Giantbomb. You cant become part of Giantbomb. Giantbomb is already perfect. It is all there is. Your song is only attempting cause of your illusion of this possibility to be Giantbomb. Your song cant attain that! It will only be YOUR song. And not Giantbomb. Not a song FOR Giantbomb.. and not anything related to Giantbomb! All it can be is a ridiculous presentation of your thoughts and your illusionary self.  BUT NEVER GIANTBOMB! "

Thats an illusion! Giantbomb is already all there could be! It is perfect and you cant "improve" it by attaching to it. You cant  rly attach to it  and  you can only create the believe of your relationship with giantbomb. There is no space for "Cube" in Giantbomb. It is perfect! Giantbomb is all there could ever exist in Giantbomb!
Open you eyes. Wake up!

" No there is no.... seperation between a song for Giantbomb or a song that is Giantbomb. Everything what is Giantbomb is Giantbomb. You cant become part of Giantbomb. Giantbomb is already perfect. It is all there is. Your song is only attempting cause of your illusion of this possibility to be Giantbomb. Your song cant attain that! It will only be YOUR song. And not Giantbomb. Not a song FOR Giantbomb.. and not anything related to Giantbomb! All it can be is a ridiculous presentation of your thoughts and your illusionary self.  BUT NEVER GIANTBOMB! "

" @DickDickenson said:

" No there is no.... seperation between a song for Giantbomb or a song that is Giantbomb. Everything what is Giantbomb is Giantbomb. You cant become part of Giantbomb. Giantbomb is already perfect. It is all there is. Your song is only attempting cause of your illusion of this possibility to be Giantbomb. Your song cant attain that! It will only be YOUR song. And not Giantbomb. Not a song FOR Giantbomb.. and not anything related to Giantbomb! All it can be is a ridiculous presentation of your thoughts and your illusionary self.  BUT NEVER GIANTBOMB! "

Lemme guess..One to many episodes of Neon Genesis Evangelion? "

" @mattysen: Imagine Giantbomb as Giantbomb.... then you will realize.... Giantbomb will be forever and was always. Cause to be able to stop Giantbomb or start Giantbomb there must be sth where Giantbomb is! There must be sth Giantbomb can end in. But there is only Giantbomb! All there is is Giantbomb. Even nothing is Giantbomb!   And what is Neon Genisis Evangelion? Is it sth you wanna relate to Giantbomb? Thats not possible! Giantbomb is already all there is... its perfection! "

I think it can be a very good song, but your timing is really off on some stuff. Some of the note/key shifts should be changed.

the synth chords that are going throughout the song aren't really in time with the drums (which are nice might i add) but yeah this really isn't that consistent and it doesn't feel like it has a big theme to it until the big change in the middle which is a lot better
 
keep going bro. got some nice taste there

" Its ridiculous! Giantbomb is good as it is! Dont try to improve it with you music! Its pure perfection. Its all there is. Giantbomb is everything it should be! Its not about you. Giantbomb is nothing you can identify with.  Giantbomb is just Giantbomb. Giantbom is Drew, Dave, Jeff, Vinny, Brad, Ryan etc....  What Giantbomb isnt:  Its not YOU!!! There is no you and Giantbomb. There is only Giantbomb! "

It's cool, needs some lyrics though, things like 

"Giant Bomb GOOOO!!" 
"I make bombs go boooom!"
 
Loop that shit and you're golden

Verson 2 is out with better timing, quantized and effect's added.
 
@Emilio:
Tried to fix all those things
 
@Ivanetc:
Cheers
 
Thanks for the feedback duders!

Not my style, per say...but grats on writing a song for the Bomb!

The beat/tempos' a tad off, with the tune. And the beats go off 4/4 once in a while which screws up the pulse... but otherwise, good job.