@McGhee_the_Insomniac said:
Lord of the Rings is amazing because of its richness and depth, part of that is all of those descriptions. If you weren't lazy and allowed yourself to be immersed into the world, you might start to see it. There's never been a greater work when it comes to world building.
Do you ever create a thread that doesn't just involve you complaining about shit?
There is a world of difference between world building as you put it, and doing so with good pacing. A lot of the premium writers on this Earth, both past and present, have had a deft touch when it came to crafting a world and its characters through the best choice of words. Nobody is saying that purple prose are not welcome, but they need to be used in moderation, the same as anything else. Tolkien's issue was that he never edited his work. A decent writer can write a hundred pages of purple prose, but a good writer knows which words to use and get across their point in a concise manner.
As for your closing point, I have no idea if the OP is butthurt all the time. I do know that in this case, his butthurt is warranted.
@Jay444111 said:
J.R.R.Tolkien SEVERLY needed an editor back then. I mean, damn, just... damn. I am 200 pages into fellowship and it feels like I could rip out 100 of those pages in terms of proof reading the overly descriptive stuff out... which INFECTS the book so far.
The book is cool when things ACTUALLY HAPPEN, however the descriptions are so damn boring and interrupt the damn story so damn much that I can feel my hand wanting to reach to my DS to relieve the boredom of reading such huge descriptions, now, if there was a glossary it would be good if he had just put them in the back of the book, but by putting them right in the middle of things going on, it feels more like a chore reading this book so far then anything else.
Now, I love the movies, love them to death. However... I am amazed by how BORING this book is so far.
J.R.R. Tolkien is so damn good at overly describing things, that he could probably describe a leaf dropping from a tree in over one hundred pages. I am unsure if this is a gift or not however... should I continue, or does his overly descriptive story interrupts keep happening at an even worse rate?
Just quit reading where you are. You aren't missing much that the Extended Edition of the LOTR trilogy doesn't provide.
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