I also really enjoy Sunshine. This is a synopsis full of spoilers, however, not a review. If someone who has not yet seen the movie read this, they'd be upset. When writing a review, you want to avoid story spoilers and expand your opinion. The whole point of reading a review is to get the writer's opinion beyond "it was good" while not feeling like they are reading a book report.
You gloss over a few of your points. You say "the writing is decent but not great". What makes it merely decent, in your opinion? What do you think makes great writing and how is that not exhibited in Sunshine's script? Did the dialogue sound natural and move the story or did it sound like filler? Were the characters flat and uninteresting or unrealistic? I, and your other readers, would like to know why you were unimpressed with the script.
You say the soundtrack is good and I agree with you but I want to know why you like it. How does the music make you feel? Is it a purely atmospheric score or is the music used to punch up certain scenes? Does it remind you of some of your other favorite film scores or is it like nothing you've ever heard before? I agree with you that "Surface of the Sun" is a great piece of music, but why do you think so? For me, I love the way it starts softly with just a melancholy string section then slowly adds piano and other unconventional sound effects, building a sense of triumph while remaining sad. It is tragic, heart-breaking but also heart-warming. It reminds me of Hans Zimmer's "Journey to the Line" or Clint Mansell's "Welcome to Lunar Industries".
Conveying your opinion about something, especially a work of fiction, while not discussing plot points is really difficult. I write a book blog so I completely understand the struggle. Learning to convey your opinion, how the experience made you feel, what the experience made you think, without spoiling the story will make your reviews much better and you will have a better chance at retaining readers. Keep at it!
Log in to comment