poem i wrote back in grade 7, please rate

it's called vimy ridge

What context was it written in? I can only rate if i know the context.

you get a big green tick and a gold star sticker.

I will give you a 2/5 stars for your poem sir.

I think it would help if you used proper grammar, otherwise It was not too bad.

"I used to write poetry strictly so I could invite girls over and read it to them.  It was really crappy poetry, too. 


"Let's sit on my bed and talk about feelings.""

"I used to write poetry strictly so I could invite girls over and read it to them.  It was really crappy poetry, too. 


"Let's sit on my bed and talk about feelings.""

"I used to write poetry strictly so I could invite girls over and read it to them.  It was really crappy poetry, too. 


"Let's sit on my bed and talk about feelings.""

6/10

"lol seriously?

what age was that? any luck?"

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I will give you a 2/5 stars for your poem sir.

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2.5/5

"MB said:

"I used to write poetry strictly so I could invite girls over and read it to them.  It was really crappy poetry, too. 


"Let's sit on my bed and talk about feelings.""

LoL..that seems like a nice way to get some"

i've seen better

crap

not bad.

Not bad but I dig poems that rhyme consistently

"Rowr said:

"lol seriously?

what age was that? any luck?"

I used that technique with great success from early in high school all the way through college.  It works great, but the success ratio is directly proportional to the intelligence of the girl you're trying it on.  Typically, the older the girl, the more likely you are to get told to "Save it.""

poetry is the devil, so i give you, sir, a look of disgust

There seems to be little point to the poem. That's the important thing, to have a poem that has a point, even if the point is frivolous.