Goddamn, completely forgot about this.
Yes, it's a download. It's not like I'm trying to give you a virus or somethin', the flu's not really my thing.

Wow. With this kind of premise, you could have really fucked it up, and fallen into the trap of cliches, etc. I only found one phrase that really bothered me; hitman. Call him anything but that. The game play sound intriguing, almost like Kane & Lynch (but not sucky). 

Dude, this has the potential to be a great game. Between this and the one you entered the Developer for a Day Contest with (I can't remember the name), you have one hell of a career ahead of you.

That is shaping up to be epic.

This might be something huge brewing.  And I mean HUGE.

Damn, I'm actually impressed that people like it. It seemed like a hit-or-miss-thing just waiting to go wrong completely.

I really love your style of the narrative in the beginning....I LOVE THAT. It is truly amazing. 

It doesn't work, BrainDead. The download it not being connected with another program. I open it with Microsoft Word and Open Office but they just portray the file as an encoding.

Use a pdf reader, dude. 

Whoa.