is there aliens in it?

Let's turn this into a Bombcrew fan fiction thread.

Show, don't tell.

What is this, Tumblr?

(also, run-on sentences)

liar.

It's about to get hot in here.

Ryan got married yesterday... but to WHOM!? I'll leave the premise there. You flesh it out as you want and thank me later.

Also, I have absolutely no fucking clue what this topic is about.

That's EXACTLY what a liar would say!

Ryan got married, Patrick "leaves" the office and gay marriage is legalised, all in one week? Now, I don't want to imply anything but....just think about it.

You're basically rewriting Orpheus getting his beloved Persephone back from Hades? Know your classics, not the retellings of it (Joe Abercrombie’s First Law???)

I been meaning to read Joe Abercrombie for a while now, maybe I should do sooner rather than later.

In any case a nice read, by the way, as we are (kinda) talking about fan fiction, have anyone read Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality?

• Have you ever felt Harry was kind of a moron? And wouldn't it be cool if Harry had been more like Artemis Fowl in the books by Eoin Colfer?
• What if story had been less of a cliché?

Well say no more.

Force yourself to rewrite it using 15 fewer commas.

@jimbo said:

That didn't work on Patrick, too.

Seems like an interesting start but if you're using TFL trilogy as a base then remember to keep the fantastical elements somewhat subdued. With a plot about retrieving someone from the gates of death you could easily go a bit crazy. And yeah, there are a few too many commas. Keep us updated.

I remember it. Someone has that in a google doc somewhere.

In my Giant Bomb fanfiction Brad is secretly the avatar of death and in the end he destroys the world because Jeff never played Persona 3.

I have it. It's quite frightening.

@brotherbran: If you want to write a story on your blog that's fine, but the forums are for starting discussions. Please don't take up space on the boards to post single paragraphs of your fan-fics.