@SpaceInsomniac: Still, I have a feeling I could have done a better job with the "I"s. Ever since I started giving this writing thing more thought I have this other problem. When I read articles on the internet now it sticks out to me when the author goes out of his way to change around subjects to get some variety into his sentences.
Tenses are still my biggest problem. Most of the time I feel like I'm just shooting in the dark. And fucking commas, how do they work?
So, any thoughts on that ScummVM series idea?
@LethalKi11ler: Glad you liked it. I was a bit worried that people would read it and think that I'm a self-important douchebag who's just out for some backhand bragging about his Bastion rank. Which might or might not be true. Also, I gut bumped to rank 51 :(
@AlisterCat: I think the eloquentedness is a bi-product of learning a second language. Somewhere between school-taught English and reading books, I can't really get a feeling for what's casual and what's not. I noticed that non-natives make less your/you're, there/they're/their mistakes because they view it less as a sound and more like a sequence of letters. I have been thinking a lot about this stuff. Maybe my OCD is not just gaming related.