Too many long shots, try cutting out some of the fluff in the middle where your just walking or sitting there. It took too long to get to the reveal at he end. Good work on the effects though, i remember learning how to do that in high school, it is a lot of fun.

lulz

I like how you made a blog post since your last try got locked. 
 
" If you want to promote youtube video's you make, feel free to post them on your blog - but please don't attach it to the forums." 
Yet you did :D 
 
Anyways I will have to agree with crusader about cutting all the fluff. Other than that a decent job. =D

As you were told in your last topic, keep the blog associated to just your profile page. To do so when creating the blog and hitting submit to post it, navigate away from the page and DO NOT confirm associating the blog to any of the suggested boards that appear.
 
We do not appreciate topics that consist of simply a link to a site, news article, video etc and have no lengthy original commentary with them to inspire discussion value. Topics consisting of just a video etc with little more than a five word sentence are considered spam :)