Mindless Dissaray(Poem)

Posted by DemonicPoetGamer (70 posts) -

Mindless dissaray

War has found a new home
In the hearts and minds of we
Who must roam

Always peaceful
Never bad
Until the war
Stole my dad

Now blood stains my soul
Filling my throat
Making me choke

I will fight forever
As long as I live
Killing all in my way
My only gift to give

#1 Posted by DemonicPoetGamer (70 posts) -

Mindless dissaray

War has found a new home
In the hearts and minds of we
Who must roam

Always peaceful
Never bad
Until the war
Stole my dad

Now blood stains my soul
Filling my throat
Making me choke

I will fight forever
As long as I live
Killing all in my way
My only gift to give

#2 Posted by Bulldog19892 (1795 posts) -

Very dark. Personally, I find it a little melodramatic and cliche, but that's just my opinion. I'm sure others will disagree with me.

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