Please stop putting music over music. I understand that people may find that music funny but you can still hear the Nidhogg Music under it and laying music that doesn't match is just a cacophony of noise that makes it hard to enjoy what we're watching. That and (personal preference) that jaunty song is actually bad and hearing it over and over is grating.
Was this basically a half hour of nothing? I got 9 minutes in and it just didn't seem like it was actually going anywhere. If that was the point then good job I guess?
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