Remember how they've promised that everything would depend on the player? They took this freedom away from you when Shelby kills Manfred, but that's not a problem. The problem is the lame, five second-long sequence they pulled to have an excuse when that happened. Come on. It could've been done in many better ways, but instead they lead us to believe Shelby did it with telekinesis and the only hint of it is that he looks a tiny bit unfocused after Lauren looks at him again.
Ethan's blackouts looked like something big and then they delete themselves from the plot without explanation why did they even happen. Okay, they've put a red herring in, it's okay, but it's a crime not to explain that stuff when it's featured as a major plot point.
Madison reacts to the truth behind the Origami Killer with complete shock - that makes no sense, since she meets Shelby for the first time during the ending and that doesn't even need to be the case. So why does that happen? They've forgotten half of the script?
Also - and that is the smallest problem - what kind of dumb parent keeps evidence from the police when their kid's life is in danger? How did they expect the police to find them? Yeah, it makes much more sense to give stuff that could matter to a complete stranger who had been allegedly hired by the dead kids' families, but fails to produce any confirmation of this fact.
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