These Need Work
These pages have poor grammar, formatting, need updated information, are poorly written, contain second person, opinionated, etc.
These pages have poor grammar, formatting, need updated information, are poorly written, contain second person, opinionated, etc.
Reads like a fan gushing over it in several parts, poorly written. Also written in past tense, for some reason.
Second person
Formatting, misguided information (e.g. information about Super Mario Advance)
Formatting
Could use some images
Grammatical touch-ups
Broken images
Image formatting
"Time Attack Mode" section completely missing
Could use some images in the body, more information about gameplay, possibly some links.
Formatting, second person
Tiny bit of second person
Replace all instances of "Goldeneye" with "GoldenEye"
Expand the overview section slightly with a little more information
Formatting, poor sentence construction. I think I'll just redo this whole page.
Weirdly worded body, definitely needs work.
Opinionated overview section
Needs work in formatting/rewriting, new blurb too
Releases need to be sorted out
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